Treatment Feedback

We presented our treatment to Mr Hood and had a very lengthy discussion about it. It was said that there were no actual issues with our treatment, however, after discussion we have decided to add a back story to the father. We want to imply to the audience that he is a dangerous man without using dialogue, therefore we are going to add a scene at the start with him walking out of a prison, however, we will have to pick costumes carefully to show that he is in fact an ex-prisoner rather than a prison officer.
We realised early on that showing the dad actually being arrested would be quite difficult, and the police may refuse to do such a scene for us. Instead, to show that the dad is about to be arrested, we have decided that far off police sirens will be added into our flashback scene to indicate that the police are on their way to the family residence.